The Blind Side of Love ([info]tbsol) wrote,
@ 2003-03-03 01:15:00
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Chapters 61 & 62
It was too long to post here so:

http://midnightisland.com/TBSOL25.htm

Enjoy :)

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[info]silverangel19
2003-03-03 12:42 am UTC (link)
OMG what an amazing update. I was completely mesmerized as I read. I cant believe how well you write. I am completely looking forward to the next update. :)

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(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 02:40 am UTC (link)
What she said!!
I'm just sitting here blinking stupidly at my screen and all I can think is "WOW!"
I loved every word of that update, and it made me feel so many things that it'd take at least 403 pages to tell them all. ;)
It seems inadequate but I just want to say : thank you, Dreams. Reading you today was again pure bliss.
Keeg'
ps : it was soooooo much better than a kiss!! You totally rock.

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You're going to make me late for my flight
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 06:11 am UTC (link)
But it was totally worth it. :) Awesome update!

-Rhonda

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[info]aquila1nz
2003-03-03 09:57 am UTC (link)
Wow. So close!

I'm thoroughly impressed with how restrained Leigh is being. Do we get to see Pizza night?

Loved the scene with Mark.

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(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 10:21 am UTC (link)
I practically drooled over this update, I love the little touches, the brushing of cheeks, holding hands to lead each other places or jus because and the cuddling (and yes Kris you WERE cuddling)and it's great how we great to witness Kris' ever-increasing lusty thoughts, it's just too cute.

One thing that's thrown me, why was mark giggling when when he found out Julianne was Julia? I've obviously missed something which is unthinkable since I have devoured each word of this story like a hungry...umm, hippo.

Also, why oh why, dear Mark, did you bother to cover up your verbal slip about Kris and girls and sexuality, though I don't think it matters too much at this point.

XO-Emily-OX

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Emily, you are my hero!
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-03 10:56 am UTC (link)
I just went back to check the conversation between Kris and William and Mark the night she told them about her confusing feelings ...

And I realized that Kris said 'Julianne' not Julia .. and she even outed Julianne to them.

HAHAHAHAHA..

I need to rewrite that conversation now. Hehe... this should be even better.

Erm, yes ... so that's what I get for posting without proofreading or checking back on what I've written before.

But this should be fun to write so I don't mind ...

God I'm in a silly mood.

I need sleep.

Thank you, my hungry literary hippo .. keep devouring! ;)

Much love,
Dreams

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Re: Emily, you are my hero!
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Wow, I made a genuinely helpful point! La la la first time for everything :D

Can't wait to see the revisionisted?? conversation.

Also in regards to one of your previous comments, as self-appointed president of the Lesbian Cliche Club, i'd like to inform you that all situations lesbian-like that have previously been done to death were studiously avoided in this update that is not to say that it is obvious to the reader that situations were askewed to the point of 'wacky' in order to avoid aforementioned Cliches but more to say this update was 'Right on!' in it's balance between that which is commonplace vs. that other which is peculiar. UHmmm, roger over and out? Roger back in again - and your paragraphs were totally short enough ;)Out.


XO-Emily-OX
XO-She who speaketh in tongues-OX

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Re: Emily, you are a dunce!
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 02:47 pm UTC (link)
I checked the dictionary, the word that escaped me, if you couldn't crack my code... is REVISED now if I had done as such during my Eng. Lang. exams this word might not have escaped my mental grasp.

xoeox

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Re: Emily, you are a dunce!
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-03 02:59 pm UTC (link)
You can start your very own dictionary ... :)

It's okay, I created the word 'werehouse' and several others. Creative spelling. It's a gift. Embrace it ;)

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Re: Emily, you are my hero!
[info]tbsol
2003-03-03 02:56 pm UTC (link)
Hehe.. well the "revisionisted" conversation is gonna be exactly the same except for like 2 sentences. I thought it would be more complicated .. but I'll deal with the complications in the next update.

Wow, it is such an honor to meet the President of the Lesbian Cliche Club! And I avoided cliches??GREAT! I have done my duty! Whew! :D

Would you like a jelly bean?

And something tells me you read my other journal :)

~Dreams
She speaketh's with a tongue


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Re: Emily, you are my madwoman!
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 03:20 pm UTC (link)
A-ha! but we (the collective to whom all the tongues belong) have eeked 'like two' NEW 'sentances' outta ya! Hoorah for us - okay me. As I spit out at my psycho-ogle-ist 'me, them, her, whatever' pah, multiple personaliies my butt.

Jelly beans huh? got anything else, a minted fig or some tasty liquor-rich perhaps.

What other journal? You have another journal, honest? Wow, you must really like to write stuff, I just stumbled accross about this one, musta dreamt that whole Cliche Club stuff...I do have psychic powers aisle have you know...

Ok, I cave, I read it! But do you havta make it sound like I'm some big ol' knowsy perv, riveling?? through your paperwork. sheesh..kebab ;)

XO-Emily-OX

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Re: Emily, you are my madwoman!
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-03 08:05 pm UTC (link)
Hmm... well I've got Hershey's kisses. Want some? :)



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<sigh>
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 10:36 am UTC (link)
Gosh darnit! They're just too adorable! This whole update was wonderful... I notice they're still laying all over the bed with each other despite an entire apartment of new furniture!

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Your fabulosity knows no bounds
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Great update, thanks for being such a star!! I love the way this is going.

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Hit counter is not broken ...
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 06:20 pm UTC (link)
Well Ingrid,
You definitely desrve all the praise and accolades today. By all that good and holy, that was a fabulous update. Jeez, but my wee heart almost stopped when I saw the immortal words ... 'It was too long to post here so:' What a way to start the week.

This story is getting better all the time and that is an amazing feat as every single word, sentence and paragraph stands out in its own as an individual work of art.

Btw, the hit counter does seem to be working as I went in a few times to check and damn if it didn't go up with me!! LOL.

On another note, I followed the link to Camilla LJ and when I back spaced I got the post for Feb 14th again. Just thought I'd let you know.

Best wishes,
ELma

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Re: Hit counter is not broken ...
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-03 08:02 pm UTC (link)
I don't know... maybe the Feb 14 post is stalking you ;)

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I enjoyed...
(Anonymous)
2003-03-03 10:09 pm UTC (link)
A lot! Seriously, great update... Didn't know what to do, but a wide, idiotic smile was a given! Wow, I praise you. No one can pull this sexual tension (for months) like you. Awesome!

BTW, don't think the counter's broken... Since I keep telling people about this story, maybe gained you some readers. *shrugs*

- Mel.

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mine pome
(Anonymous)
2003-03-04 06:01 am UTC (link)
A Tribute to Dreams

Dreams Dreams
She’s such a fruit
She may not be dumb
But she ain’t astute

She’s not that cute
But she keeps it real
And her taste in music
Is almost ideal

(It's like that beans rhyme...)

p.s.-lines four and five were put there just because they fit the pattern and they rhyme, although line five could be the truth

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Re: mine pome
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-04 10:04 am UTC (link)
Awww - a poem for me?! *sniff* I'm so flattered :)

And you're right, I'm not astute or cute ... but yay for my taste in music.. woo!

I think I'll frame that... :)

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Re: mine pome
[info]ambine
2003-03-04 04:26 pm UTC (link)
Awww, guys... Dreams is plenty cute... And smart. She's a good pick. :)

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light (re)verse
(Anonymous)
2003-03-04 03:58 pm UTC (link)
If Dreams ain't cute
it ain't her looks,
she seems a beaut
just from her book!

(I think that Dreams
is what she seems:
smart and tender
sexy and strong,
a story-teller's
paragon).

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Re: light (re)verse
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-04 04:27 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww ... that was really sweet :D Thank you!

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Te esta kedando genial!
(Anonymous)
2003-03-04 06:13 pm UTC (link)
Hola, he leido la actualización del fic y me gusto muchisimo, escribo en español porque sé que tu lo entiendes muy bien y mi ingles ejem...bue ke tampoco es tan malo pero si se puede escribir en español mejor. Pues nada solo eso ke las historia cada vez se pone mejor y estoy impaciente por leer algo más :D

Un saludo
Rogue

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Be still my beating heart :)
(Anonymous)
2003-03-05 08:51 am UTC (link)
I doubt I can add anything to what everyone else has already said... The update, once again, was purely brilliant ;) I was mightily impressed with the avoidance of lesbian cliches - oh, how I don't love them. It's a rare feat to be completely original, and you are. :)

Jess :o)

P.S - I found Alfred hiding in the hedge. He wants to see you, apparently ;)

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ERES LA MEJOR
(Anonymous)
2003-03-06 03:30 pm UTC (link)
Sigo el ejemplo de Rogue, y te escribo en español
He leido algunos fan fic, y salvo Melissa Good, Creo que eres la mejor escritora de Fan Fic, sigue adelante chica.
Ah Feliz Cumpleaños, ya se que el lunes 10 estaremos cantando Happy Birthay. Deseo lo mejor para mi escritora favorita.
XETA11457

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Re: ERES LA MEJOR
[info]wickedkiwi
2003-03-09 09:00 am UTC (link)
Aww, gracias! Eres muy amable :)

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[info]aquila1nz
2003-03-06 03:55 pm UTC (link)
I just reread it again and now I want to know:

What did William say to Kris?

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William
(Anonymous)
2003-03-08 03:14 pm UTC (link)
Yeah what did William say to Kris? Is that going to be told next week?
I, like everybody else loved the update. I even went back and went threw it a 2nd time. It was just as good as the 1st time. I love your work and can't wait till there is more.

You may have answered this already but are you going to publish this when you are done? I HOPE SO!

Got to go. BTW beauty is in the eye of the beholder. So There!!

Linda B.

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Re: Eye of the beholder
(Anonymous)
2003-03-08 05:15 pm UTC (link)
No, Ambine seems to have the lowdown, the girl is cute, in or out of the beholder's eye! It's just that the WRITER is beyond lovable.

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Help, I'm wearing out my TBSOL bookmark!
(Anonymous)
2003-03-20 05:52 pm UTC (link)
Not that I'm obsessive or anything, checking in a thousand times a day in hopes of an update ; )

Dreams, we need something to think about instead of 24/7 war coverage! Update soon!

- Cindy from the City

ps - and a belated thank you for those 2 superb chapters!

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Where is Everybody?
(Anonymous)
2003-03-27 05:09 am UTC (link)
Just wondering. Usually there'd be a thousand update requests by now...



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